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If i break by portia moore
If i break by portia moore












The errors in If I Break are an ugly and endless pit. *bangs head on the table*ġ77 x laugh, laughs, laughing, laughter, laughedħ4 x soft, softly, softens, softer, softest, softeningħ6 x tear (a single tear, it's not the verb), tears (plural of tear) Repetitiveness is an issue that will make me go through the roof. Yet there are moments when there is something kind and warm looking from behind them. Sometimes I look into them and they're vacant, cold, and void. His eyes-I think I fell in love with his eyes. Why is it that when Cal isn't with me, I miss him so much it's worse than physical pain? Why is it when I see his eyes, sometimes I swear I see a side of him he won't allow me to fully know? And even more so, considering the fact that Cal practically swum in money. If I had been in her shoes I wouldn’t have accepted that crap. By the way, what kind of woman marries a man and has no clue what said hubs does for a living? Well, Cal was allegedly in such a confidential position that he couldn’t give his own wife any details in regards to his job description. Yep, Lauren, I got it that Cal is a mystery, so quit babbling about the same again and again. I lost count how many times Lauren said she didn't know Cal even though they'd been together for three years. I mean when the comments about him being an enigma are shoved down my throat ad friggin' nauseam I'm ready to capitulate. That's when I thought Lauren might be suffering from Dissociative Identity Disorder but soon it was obvious that the Mystery Man was Cal. Thankfully, my brain cells are released from my hormones' grip and direct me to extend my hand. "I mean, I'm Lauren," I laugh, hoping the music covers my ridiculous answer and that I won't drop dead of embarrassment right here. Wake up, genius! I scream inside my head. "She's Lauren," I can't help but whisper. Also, the constant back and forth between 20 was terribly annoying and impaired the flow of the story. Save me from such an unbelievable and cheesy drama fest. Unfortunately this story has been inundated with angry outbursts at their worst, shouting matches, and tears ad nauseam.

if i break by portia moore if i break by portia moore

'Oh, I still love him,' blah blah blah…'But I don't know him.' *pets*

if i break by portia moore

Lauren of 2008 acts like a shy, awkward, and embarrassing little girl and Lauren of 2011 is a whiny bitch who throws temper tantrums, screams her head off, growls, and acts like a dumb twat and will be gladly appeased with sex.

if i break by portia moore

She was never able to pull off a decent conversation and got on. The imbecile of a heroine was bathing in idiotic hissy fits and communicated through pleading, mumbling, crying, anger, sarcasm, and screaming. If I Break is a redundant story that features unlikable characters, really poor writing and über shoddy editing to the point where I felt appalled that something so incredibly bad has seen the light of day in the first place. I couldn't resist the little pun…you'll know what I mean after you've read my review.














If i break by portia moore